Copywriting Sales Page Source: https://coachadib.com/module/6ac033f2c9df5ee2bec8f921 Automatic full-length draft. Uncertain wording and figures require review. [00:00:00.460 – 00:00:01.580] Copywriting Sales Page. [00:00:01.840 – 00:00:04.240] Okey, macam mana nak buat copywriting untuk Sales Page ni guys? [00:00:04.420 – 00:00:05.840] By the way, kita dah dekat mana? [00:00:06.560 – 00:00:07.640] Kita dah dekat sini. [00:00:08.440 – 00:00:10.820] So, kita dah cover blueprint, asas, funnel. [00:00:11.040 – 00:00:11.880] Kita sekarang ni dekat. [00:00:12.300 – 00:00:14.580] Apakah copywriting yang bagus bila nak buat Sales Page ni? [00:00:14.760 – 00:00:17.860] Kalau tadi, saya dah tunjukkan flow pasal Sales Page. [00:00:18.100 – 00:00:18.880] Awak ingat tak? [00:00:19.040 – 00:00:23.500] Kipto, bagai apa semua ni, ni semua adalah flow-flow lah bila buat Sales Page. [00:00:23.720 – 00:00:24.980] Kita ada banyak jenis Sales Page. [00:00:25.500 – 00:00:27.880] Persoalan dia, apa copywriting yang kita nak buat? [00:00:27.880 – 00:00:34.220] Sebab sebelum kita masuk pada topik yang seterusnya, kita nak design, copywriting ni kena belajar dulu. [00:00:34.500 – 00:00:42.180] Okay, so untuk solvekan masalah copywriting ni, saya nak memperkenalkan kepada formula penulisan. [00:00:42.460 – 00:00:52.720] Dan saya suka guna satu artikel ni, kalau buat type, copywriting Bukit Bukau. [00:00:53.240 – 00:00:54.240] Saya tekan tengok je pulak. [00:00:55.660 – 00:00:56.840] Tak keluar, aduh. [00:01:01.260 – 00:01:05.840] Bukit Bukau, Wan Yusof. Kita tengok keluar tak? [00:01:08.750 – 00:01:12.270] Ada, Wan Yusof ada. Ini cikgu yang mengajarnya. [00:01:13.430 – 00:01:18.130] Cuma mana Wan Yusof? Dia dah domain dia, website dia dah tak ada. [00:01:18.250 – 00:01:24.010] Sekejap, saya cari. Wan Yusof. Sifu Wan Yusof. [00:01:25.370 – 00:01:30.620] Sebab saya nak cari asal dia. Oh tak ada. [00:01:33.230 – 00:01:38.750] Teknik Bukit Bukau. Teknik Bukit Bukau artikel. [00:01:42.180 – 00:01:52.260] Yang ni kot. Inilah artikel dia. Tapi dah tak ada dah. Website tu. Website tu dah hilang. [00:01:55.800 – 00:01:58.860] Tapi apa lah. Nasib baik ada orang duplicate lah bingung. [00:01:59.360 – 00:02:12.120] Okay. So. Bila awak nak tulis. Tulis copywriting ni guys. Kita kena faham yang cara menulis copywriting ni. [00:02:12.320 – 00:02:17.140] Dia macam awak menulis blog artikel. So bila awak menulis blog artikel. [00:02:17.140 – 00:02:19.260] Kita akan guna ayat pendek-pendek [00:02:19.260 – 00:02:21.380] Macam ni lah, contoh ni ayat pendek-pendek macam ni [00:02:21.380 – 00:02:22.920] Dan pergerakan mata [00:02:22.920 – 00:02:25.300] Hari ini, hari ahad, nampak? Macam ni [00:02:28.040 – 00:02:29.080] Apabila ayat pendek [00:02:29.080 – 00:02:31.160] Seperti contoh ayat 2, mata kita suka [00:02:31.160 – 00:02:33.280] Otak kita cepat tangkap gambaran ayat [00:02:33.280 – 00:02:35.460] Ni, benda ni real lah [00:02:35.460 – 00:02:37.180] Hari ini, hari ahad [00:02:37.180 – 00:02:38.380] Dia guna ayat yang simple-simple [00:02:40.040 – 00:02:41.080] Kita jangan buat [00:02:41.080 – 00:02:42.960] Ayat yang terlampau heavy [00:02:42.960 – 00:02:45.080] Ni contoh pula, nampak? [00:02:47.050 – 00:02:47.710] Contoh satu [00:02:50.280 – 00:02:52.040] Berapa ramai yang baca contoh satu kat atas? [00:02:52.040 – 00:02:54.220] tak larat kan, betul tak larat [00:02:54.220 – 00:02:55.560] macam banyaknya benda nak baca [00:02:55.560 – 00:02:57.420] ini sama macam website, sebab tu [00:02:58.140 – 00:03:00.440] copywriting yang bagus dekat website, buat orang baca [00:03:01.180 – 00:03:02.200] copywriting yang tak bagus [00:03:02.200 – 00:03:02.800] buat orang skip [00:03:04.140 – 00:03:05.220] compare pula dengan ni [00:03:06.940 – 00:03:08.260] dengan ni, nampak [00:03:08.900 – 00:03:10.340] ini daripada penulisan [00:03:10.340 – 00:03:12.340] Niel Patel, kita senang [00:03:12.340 – 00:03:13.940] nak baca, sebab tu penting [00:03:14.780 – 00:03:16.120] kelebaran website ni pun jangan [00:03:16.120 – 00:03:18.320] lebar sangat, lepas tu [00:03:18.320 – 00:03:20.380] website ni pun kena ada [00:03:20.380 – 00:03:24.460] spacing, spacing, spacing, spacing. Haa ni. Maksudnya [00:03:24.460 – 00:03:28.700] copywriting ni bukan sekadar ayat yang dia tulis tapi susunan [00:03:28.700 – 00:03:32.740] ayat tu sendiri. Ayat tu macam mana kita nak potong dia, kita [00:03:32.740 – 00:03:37.320] nak bagi spacing, bagi mata kita senang scan. Mata kita [00:03:37.320 – 00:03:39.940] sebenarnya dia scan, dia tak baca sangat pun. Compare dengan [00:03:39.940 – 00:03:44.640] atas ni, awak nak scan apa je awak nampak? Banyak kan? Tapi [00:03:44.640 – 00:03:46.720] yang ni pula, haa, nampak, boleh nampak [00:03:46.720 – 00:03:48.760] ok, so next [00:03:48.760 – 00:03:50.400] pula, kita [00:03:50.400 – 00:03:52.680] start buat tulisan besar, tulisan kecil, haa, ni lagi [00:03:52.680 – 00:03:54.120] better lah, ok [00:03:54.820 – 00:03:56.620] nak kuruskan website, haa, kita nak [00:03:56.620 – 00:03:58.660] kuruskan website, sebab tu website ni, jangan lebar [00:03:58.660 – 00:04:00.660] lebar sangat, kalau awak tengok [00:04:00.660 – 00:04:02.520] contoh saya tunjuk kat awak, satu copywriting [00:04:02.520 – 00:04:08.400] yang saya buat ni, hiring [00:04:09.320 – 00:04:10.600] ok, ni kan [00:04:10.600 – 00:04:12.300] tapi yang ni versi desktop [00:04:12.300 – 00:04:14.060] saya buat versi mobile eh, sebab tu [00:04:14.760 – 00:04:15.900] copywriting ni awak kena faham [00:04:15.900 – 00:04:18.200] jangan tengok versi desktop [00:04:18.200 – 00:04:23.280] always tengok versi mobile sebab 90% user dekat mobile. So, [00:04:23.620 – 00:04:26.880] perasan tak cooperating saya macam ni? Dapatkan video tutorial, [00:04:27.180 – 00:04:30.680] blueprint business owner, play video preview bawah. Pendek eh? [00:04:31.020 – 00:04:33.460] From solopreneur to entrepreneur, complete kat tanpa upsell. Dah. [00:04:35.620 – 00:04:40.460] Ini panjang lah sebab ni topik-topik dia. Dah simple. Macam tu. [00:04:41.080 – 00:04:46.140] Cooperating dia ni tak payah beria sangat macam ni. Mata awak senang [00:04:46.140 – 00:04:49.760] nak scan. Awak tengok, oh RM50. Oh, ni lah barang-barang dia. [00:04:50.580 – 00:04:53.800] Sebab structure ayat tu, size tu memang peranan. Sebab tu bila [00:04:53.800 – 00:04:58.180] kita buat cooperating ni, kita tak perlu macam nak buat dia [00:04:59.480 – 00:05:03.260] contoh macam ni. Ha ni. Ni salah satu sales page yang kita [00:05:03.260 – 00:05:12.020] buat lah. Katalah saya tekan play ke sini. Ni pakai Figma [00:05:12.020 – 00:05:14.540] by the way. Figma ni dia boleh ada satu features ni nama dia [00:05:14.540 – 00:05:18.520] play. Kita boleh buat preview macam mana rupa dia bila dia [00:05:18.520 – 00:05:24.240] dah siap nanti. Tengok. Saya nak awak tengok betul-betul. Alamak [00:05:24.240 – 00:05:29.020] dia tak cantik pula dah. Patutnya dia tak jadi macam ni. Eh ni [00:05:29.020 – 00:05:37.360] iPhone enam belas. Iphone lima belas. Macam mana? Iphone tiga belas [00:05:37.360 – 00:05:53.890] mini. Lumni bus. Fit on screen. Android empat belas kot ni [00:06:00.300 – 00:06:05.180] loading. So dia ada size-size lah. Patutnya dia [00:06:05.180 – 00:06:07.000] Dia fit kat situ [00:06:08.640 – 00:06:10.100] So bila kita design ni [00:06:10.100 – 00:06:11.000] Ni example lah [00:06:11.000 – 00:06:12.560] Tapi ni demo je guys [00:06:12.560 – 00:06:13.080] Dia tak adalah [00:06:13.080 – 00:06:14.000] Tak adalah [00:06:14.000 – 00:06:15.060] Ha [00:06:17.200 – 00:06:18.240] Oh [00:06:18.240 – 00:06:19.340] Macam tu [00:06:21.390 – 00:06:22.790] iPhone SE pun ada [00:06:22.790 – 00:06:23.830] Okay takpelah [00:06:23.830 – 00:06:24.790] Saya patah balik sini [00:06:24.790 – 00:06:26.370] So kalau ikut dia punya [00:06:26.370 – 00:06:27.470] Size dia ni [00:06:27.470 – 00:06:28.130] 360 [00:06:28.950 – 00:06:31.110] So kalau 360 punya size [00:06:31.110 – 00:06:32.790] Kita boleh tukarlah telefon kat sini [00:06:32.790 – 00:06:34.350] Tengok telefon apa yang 360 [00:06:34.350 – 00:06:35.070] Ada ke? [00:06:35.970 – 00:06:37.350] Tak ada pun telefon 360 [00:06:38.490 – 00:06:44.210] kosong. Takpelah Malayah baca kat sini. Kita baca kat sini [00:06:44.210 – 00:06:50.050] je lah. Baru belajar sebulan dua dah pecah sales 100k [00:06:50.050 – 00:06:55.570] pertama. Contohnya. Iklan tak pusing ada yang sama. Iklan [00:06:55.570 – 00:06:59.770] lambat fatig, scale up senang. So bila kita baca copywriting ni [00:06:59.770 – 00:07:07.730] copywriting ni dia cuba buat kita baca tu tak melirik. Macam ni. [00:07:08.850 – 00:07:09.630] Dia simple [00:07:10.530 – 00:07:11.890] Dia kat sini tulisan [00:07:12.450 – 00:07:13.610] Dia cuba buat macam [00:07:13.610 – 00:07:15.690] Boleh tak kita scan pun dah boleh baca dah [00:07:15.690 – 00:07:16.670] Contoh macam ni pula [00:07:16.670 – 00:07:20.310] E-commerce playbook stop bercinta dengan [00:07:20.310 – 00:07:21.210] TikTok dan Shopee [00:07:22.510 – 00:07:23.690] Nampak? Perasan tak? [00:07:23.970 – 00:07:25.450] Ada tulisan besar, tulisan kecil [00:07:25.450 – 00:07:26.350] Macam ni [00:07:26.350 – 00:07:28.290] So mata kita senang nak scan [00:07:28.290 – 00:07:29.370] Bila kita scroll ke bawah [00:07:32.420 – 00:07:33.600] Kalau boleh tampas platform [00:07:33.600 – 00:07:34.720] Tak try buat semua je [00:07:34.720 – 00:07:36.540] Sikit-sikit je macam tu je [00:07:36.540 – 00:07:39.300] So that's why bila kita buat copywriting [00:07:39.300 – 00:07:40.400] Dekat dalam website [00:07:40.400 – 00:07:43.420] Kita sebenarnya tak nak heavy sangat [00:07:43.420 – 00:07:46.320] Memang penulisan dalam copywriting ni sebenarnya [00:07:46.320 – 00:07:49.520] Dia supporting kepada grafik sahaja [00:07:49.520 – 00:07:51.760] Jadi kita baca balik artikel tadi [00:07:51.760 – 00:07:52.740] Nampak? [00:07:54.060 – 00:07:54.940] Macam itulah [00:07:54.940 – 00:07:57.080] Jadi kita akan gunakan teknik bukit bukau [00:07:57.080 – 00:07:58.180] Contoh macam ni [00:07:58.180 – 00:07:59.660] Ini tak guna teknik bukit bukau [00:07:59.660 – 00:08:01.760] Jadi nak baca tu rasa macam heavy [00:08:01.760 – 00:08:03.840] Yang ni pula guna teknik bukit bukau [00:08:04.760 – 00:08:05.400] Nampak? [00:08:05.400 – 00:08:06.620] Benda yang sama guys [00:08:06.620 – 00:08:08.260] Tapi mana senang baca [00:08:08.260 – 00:08:11.140] Of course lah yang bawah [00:08:11.140 – 00:08:12.480] Kenapa yang bawah senang baca [00:08:12.480 – 00:08:12.980] Sebab [00:08:12.980 – 00:08:16.060] Dia pecahkan mengikut emosi pembacaan [00:08:16.060 – 00:08:17.140] Senang [00:08:17.140 – 00:08:18.140] Asyik ada bull [00:08:18.140 – 00:08:19.580] Asyik ada [00:08:19.580 – 00:08:21.460] Poin-poin yang penting [00:08:21.460 – 00:08:23.420] So bila kita buat macam ni [00:08:23.420 – 00:08:24.420] Dia nampak bukit ukau [00:08:25.930 – 00:08:27.750] Ujung mata ayat dia tu [00:08:27.750 – 00:08:28.930] Itu nama dia bukit [00:08:28.930 – 00:08:30.930] Yang ni pula teknik bangunan [00:08:30.930 – 00:08:32.910] Nampak sama sekata je semua [00:08:32.910 – 00:08:33.670] Okay [00:08:33.670 – 00:08:34.430] So [00:08:34.430 – 00:08:36.710] Benda ni akan buat orang rasa bosan [00:08:37.250 – 00:08:38.290] jadi that's why lah [00:08:39.030 – 00:08:40.890] ni dah bukan lah ni, ni apa pula ni [00:08:40.890 – 00:08:42.810] miau miau miau, ni bukan lah [00:08:42.810 – 00:08:44.850] sebab ni sebenarnya artikel orang lain, dia copy paste ni [00:08:44.850 – 00:08:47.350] sebab website Sifu One Moose saya rasa dah down [00:08:47.350 – 00:08:48.450] jadi saya tak tunjuk pula [00:08:49.510 – 00:08:51.050] Sifu One Moose punya website [00:08:51.050 – 00:08:53.630] tapi awak faham lah, nak sebaik lah dia ada copy ni [00:08:53.630 – 00:08:54.670] bolehlah saya tunjuk kat awak [00:08:55.630 – 00:08:57.470] so, bila saya baca artikel ni [00:08:57.470 – 00:08:59.070] saya mula nampak macam, okey [00:08:59.070 – 00:09:01.310] so maksudnya aku tak boleh lah buat [00:09:01.310 – 00:09:03.270] copywriting ni heavy sangat [00:09:04.050 – 00:09:05.410] kita nak buat copywriting kita [00:09:05.410 – 00:09:15.660] light-light simple-simple macam tu je. Contoh benda lain saya tunjuk yang lain pula. Kita [00:09:15.660 – 00:09:22.400] tengok example yang lain pula eh. Tuan dia lampau banyak ni sales page ni. Tapi tak [00:09:22.400 – 00:09:29.200] tahu nak tunjuk mana satu. Ini Figma by the way guys. Figma dia boleh buat macam-macam. [00:09:29.560 – 00:09:34.260] Design A, B, C semua boleh. Dan dia memang fokus untuk buat website sebab dia boleh [00:09:34.260 – 00:09:36.200] buat design yang continuous. Kalau kita pakai [00:09:36.200 – 00:09:37.500] OnPay, OnPay punya problem [00:09:38.340 – 00:09:39.740] bila kita scroll, scroll, scroll [00:09:39.740 – 00:09:41.820] dia kan ada kotak-kotak-kotak. Jadi [00:09:41.820 – 00:09:44.340] dia tak rasa continuous. Kita tak dapat [00:09:44.340 – 00:09:45.900] nak feeling macam betul-betul website [00:09:45.900 – 00:09:47.620] tapi bila kita guna Figma [00:09:47.620 – 00:09:49.880] dia kita dapat buat continuous scrolling [00:09:49.880 – 00:09:51.480] daripada atas sampai lah ke bawah [00:09:53.970 – 00:09:55.570] sekejap, berat pula internet [00:09:55.570 – 00:09:57.010] kita nak mengizinkan kita [00:09:58.870 – 00:10:00.150] tapi sambil saya nak [00:10:00.150 – 00:10:02.070] tunggu loading dia ni, takkan loading dia berat [00:10:02.070 – 00:10:03.190] masuk pun, amik tau [00:10:04.210 – 00:10:06.030] tengok mana? nak tengok [00:10:06.030 – 00:10:12.090] yang mana? Banyak gila. Okey yang ni, ni contoh lain pula, ni [00:10:12.090 – 00:10:15.470] team academy punya website. Dia loading sikit sebab ni web [00:10:15.470 – 00:10:19.190] based. Jadi bila dia web based, Figma ni dia nak loading [00:10:19.190 – 00:10:22.110] tu ambil masa sikit lah. Tapi sebab internet sell slow je [00:10:22.110 – 00:10:27.910] kalau internet selakju tak dahan pun. So ni contoh. So kita [00:10:27.910 – 00:10:31.230] buat macam ni, ada tulisan sikit, ada gambar, ada tulisan [00:10:31.230 – 00:10:34.370] sikit, ada gambar, ada tulisan sikit, sikit-sikit je guys. [00:10:34.590 – 00:10:37.290] Tak payah over-over pun. Alamak tak habis loading lagi. [00:10:37.870 – 00:10:39.630] Dia tak payah beria sangat tau [00:10:39.630 – 00:10:41.330] Copywriting ni, dia memang sebenarnya [00:10:42.190 – 00:10:44.170] Copywriting ni, dia disusun [00:10:44.170 – 00:10:46.030] Dalam bentuk design [00:10:47.250 – 00:10:47.870] Macam tu [00:10:48.930 – 00:10:49.830] Macam ni, nampak [00:10:49.830 – 00:10:52.070] Dia bukanlah heavy, tak ada pun [00:10:52.070 – 00:10:53.430] Dia mungkin kita buat design-design sikit [00:10:53.430 – 00:10:55.250] Jadi sikit, ok [00:10:55.250 – 00:10:57.790] So, macam mana nak pastikan awak [00:10:57.790 – 00:11:00.070] Nak tulis copywriting yang tak menerit [00:11:00.070 – 00:11:02.190] Ok, tip saya adalah, kita akan buka [00:11:02.190 – 00:11:04.230] Dekat tab sebelah, bila awak nak buat copywriting [00:11:05.010 – 00:11:05.870] Kita akan [00:11:05.870 – 00:11:08.110] gunakan satu software ni nama dia [00:11:08.110 – 00:11:10.130] google document, ok letak buka google document [00:11:10.130 – 00:11:11.830] kat situ, lepas tu tekan [00:11:11.830 – 00:11:14.150] satu blank new document, masuk kat sini [00:11:14.150 – 00:11:16.070] ok, sekarang ni awak namakan [00:11:16.070 – 00:11:19.780] ni adalah copy [00:11:20.360 – 00:11:20.940] writing [00:11:21.560 – 00:11:22.420] sales page [00:11:22.420 – 00:11:26.760] ok, dan [00:11:26.760 – 00:11:28.940] saya nak awak naikkan [00:11:28.940 – 00:11:30.220] size dia [00:11:30.220 – 00:11:32.620] contoh kita buatlah size dia jadi [00:11:34.580 – 00:11:36.280] 20, kita try [00:11:39.590 – 00:11:40.170] anak [00:11:40.170 – 00:11:42.250] ada masalah [00:11:42.250 – 00:11:43.470] speech [00:11:47.270 – 00:11:48.070] delay [00:11:48.070 – 00:11:51.390] haa nampak [00:11:51.390 – 00:11:51.950] ok [00:11:51.950 – 00:11:53.650] so bila awak nak faham [00:11:53.650 – 00:11:54.730] sebenarnya [00:11:54.730 – 00:11:55.490] website ni [00:11:55.490 – 00:11:55.990] dia [00:11:55.990 – 00:11:57.430] tak adalah [00:11:57.430 – 00:11:58.470] besar sangat [00:11:58.470 – 00:11:59.350] dia tak adalah [00:11:59.350 – 00:12:00.250] lebar sangat [00:12:00.250 – 00:12:02.390] dan kita nak buat [00:12:02.390 – 00:12:03.230] macam ibaratnya [00:12:03.230 – 00:12:05.190] kita mimik [00:12:05.190 – 00:12:06.810] phone punya size [00:12:06.810 – 00:12:08.330] so untuk mimik sebenar [00:12:08.330 – 00:12:09.390] saya nak awak [00:12:09.390 – 00:12:10.570] tekan dekat file [00:12:10.570 – 00:12:11.050] ok [00:12:11.050 – 00:12:12.150] ikut setup saya [00:12:12.150 – 00:12:13.290] pergi dekat [00:12:13.290 – 00:12:14.130] page setup [00:12:14.130 – 00:12:15.810] saya nak buang [00:12:15.810 – 00:12:17.170] satu benda kat sini. Nampak ni? [00:12:17.890 – 00:12:19.610] Sebab saya boleh je suruh awak buat dalam Figma [00:12:19.610 – 00:12:21.710] tapi nanti awak pening pula buat kat sini. So, kita [00:12:21.710 – 00:12:23.950] jangan buat copywriting dekat dalam Figma ni dulu. [00:12:24.150 – 00:12:25.530] Kita relap dulu. Kita buat dalam Google [00:12:25.530 – 00:12:27.570] Dokumen. Tapi kita nak adjust Google [00:12:27.570 – 00:12:29.970] Dokumen kita ibarat macam size website [00:12:29.970 – 00:12:31.830] versi mobile. So, kita [00:12:31.830 – 00:12:33.590] nak hilangkan dulu ni. Page punya [00:12:34.230 – 00:12:35.750] dia ada banyak-banyak page ni kan. Kita [00:12:35.750 – 00:12:37.590] nak buat dia continuous scroll. So, kita [00:12:37.590 – 00:12:39.810] akan pergi kat file. Page setup. [00:12:40.030 – 00:12:41.250] Kita buat page list. [00:12:41.650 – 00:12:43.230] Maksudnya dia boleh scroll daripada atas [00:12:43.230 – 00:12:45.110] sampai lah bawah. Tekan page list. [00:12:45.810 – 00:12:47.310] sekejap kan tekan ok [00:12:48.170 – 00:12:49.690] nampak dah tak ada page tu dah [00:12:49.690 – 00:12:51.970] kalau awak scroll ke bawah pun dah tak wujud dah [00:12:51.970 – 00:12:54.070] dia memang akan scroll je lah sampai habis [00:12:54.070 – 00:12:55.470] ok lepas tu [00:12:56.510 – 00:12:57.750] katalah sebab panjang kan [00:12:57.750 – 00:12:58.530] ok [00:12:59.390 – 00:13:00.850] nampak dia dah akan turun ke bawah [00:13:00.850 – 00:13:03.950] ok saya nak awak naikkan size dia [00:13:03.950 – 00:13:05.110] ok awak ikut je step saya [00:13:05.710 – 00:13:06.530] select all [00:13:07.510 – 00:13:10.070] kita nak tekan center dulu [00:13:11.090 – 00:13:12.470] ok select center [00:13:13.050 – 00:13:14.290] naikkan size kita ni [00:13:14.990 – 00:13:17.650] Sampailah kita dapat lebih kurang dalam [00:13:17.650 – 00:13:20.710] Enam ke tujuh patah perkataan dalam satu baris [00:13:21.410 – 00:13:22.990] Contoh mungkin kalau saya ikut saya [00:13:22.990 – 00:13:24.230] Saya rasa dua puluh lima lah standard [00:13:24.230 – 00:13:26.070] Dua puluh lima ni standard [00:13:26.070 – 00:13:28.790] Sebab saya nak elak awak buat [00:13:28.790 – 00:13:30.670] Copywriting yang terlampau panjang [00:13:30.670 – 00:13:33.090] Saya nak biar yang dia macam mengam-engam je [00:13:33.090 – 00:13:35.230] So kita anggaplah [00:13:35.230 – 00:13:36.750] Saiz dua puluh lima [00:13:36.750 – 00:13:37.990] Kenapa? Contohnya [00:13:38.910 – 00:13:40.070] Dah penat [00:13:42.530 – 00:13:44.490] Ulang alik hospital [00:13:47.560 – 00:13:49.240] Anak selalu mengadu [00:13:53.500 – 00:13:55.060] Kena buli [00:13:56.580 – 00:13:58.740] Buli dekat sekolah [00:14:00.280 – 00:14:02.320] Jadi kalau kata tu dia panjang [00:14:02.320 – 00:14:03.420] Sampai [00:14:05.000 – 00:14:05.660] Malu [00:14:06.760 – 00:14:08.640] Jadi dia jatuh ke bawah [00:14:08.640 – 00:14:10.120] Jadi kita tahu sama dalam website [00:14:10.120 – 00:14:13.100] Dalam website pun takkan awak nak buat panjang sangat [00:14:13.100 – 00:14:15.640] Sebab kita versi mobile guys [00:14:15.640 – 00:14:17.820] Versi mobile ni kalau awak tengok dia macam ni [00:14:17.820 – 00:14:19.240] Sikit je [00:14:19.240 – 00:14:22.140] Daripada hujung ke hujung ni tak banyak pun macam ni [00:14:22.140 – 00:14:24.080] From solopreneur to entrepreneur [00:14:24.080 – 00:14:25.000] Nampak? Dah habis dah [00:14:25.600 – 00:14:27.100] So katalah kita buat pun [00:14:27.100 – 00:14:29.000] From solopreneur to entrepreneur [00:14:29.000 – 00:14:29.760] Itu pun [00:14:32.880 – 00:14:33.920] From solopreneur [00:14:35.200 – 00:14:35.720] To [00:14:38.880 – 00:14:39.400] Entrepreneur [00:14:42.860 – 00:14:43.680] Sekejap kan ni [00:14:43.680 – 00:14:46.240] Tapi nampak tak? So awak boleh mimic [00:14:46.240 – 00:14:47.500] Oh ni lah size dia [00:14:47.500 – 00:14:49.000] So that's why kita nak buat [00:14:50.220 – 00:14:50.740] Centered [00:14:51.380 – 00:14:52.480] Dengan size 25 [00:14:53.060 – 00:14:54.020] Okay, so [00:14:54.020 – 00:14:55.920] Ini adalah setup page ni [00:14:55.920 – 00:14:56.740] So, kita dah mimic [00:14:57.560 – 00:14:58.040] Replicate [00:14:58.040 – 00:14:58.780] Okay [00:14:58.780 – 00:15:01.060] Jadi, cara macam mana nak tulis ni [00:15:01.060 – 00:15:02.100] Kita lah saya padam balik [00:15:02.100 – 00:15:03.500] Okay, saya padam balik semua ni [00:15:04.260 – 00:15:04.740] Alamak [00:15:05.300 – 00:15:06.600] Saya padam sampai [00:15:07.780 – 00:15:08.480] Macam ni lah [00:15:08.480 – 00:15:09.940] Nanti dia hilang pula format dia [00:15:09.940 – 00:15:10.240] Okay [00:15:12.490 – 00:15:14.130] Apakah flow yang awak nak pakai? [00:15:15.670 – 00:15:16.850] Apa flow dia? [00:15:17.190 – 00:15:18.710] So, kita pergi balik kepada tadi tu [00:15:20.170 – 00:15:21.870] Saya nak awak decide sekarang ni [00:15:21.870 – 00:15:23.550] Yang mana satu awak nak pakai [00:15:23.550 – 00:15:25.910] Awak boleh pakai style visual [00:15:26.450 – 00:15:28.070] Awak nak buat sales page educate [00:15:28.070 – 00:15:30.030] Awak nak buat sales page result [00:15:30.730 – 00:15:32.350] Ataupun awak nak buat sales page offer [00:15:33.330 – 00:15:35.550] Katakanlah saya nak buat sales page educate [00:15:35.550 – 00:15:37.090] So saya akan tulis dulu [00:15:37.090 – 00:15:39.210] Dekat saya punya copywriting ni [00:15:39.210 – 00:15:39.790] Saya akan tulis [00:15:47.910 – 00:15:50.150] Sales page educate [00:15:50.750 – 00:15:51.750] Apa kita punya flow [00:15:51.750 – 00:15:53.750] Awak boleh tengok ni [00:15:53.750 – 00:15:55.110] Awak boleh screenshot saya punya ni [00:15:55.110 – 00:15:56.010] Awak tulis satu satu [00:15:56.890 – 00:15:57.370] Hook [00:15:58.050 – 00:16:00.230] So, nombor satu, awak kena ada [00:16:01.450 – 00:16:02.050] Hook [00:16:03.190 – 00:16:05.210] Nombor dua, awak kena ada apa? [00:16:06.190 – 00:16:08.210] Problem, killer result, solution [00:16:08.930 – 00:16:09.530] Problem [00:16:11.470 – 00:16:12.670] Killer result [00:16:14.250 – 00:16:18.810] Killer result, ok and then pula kita nak kena ada solution [00:16:23.730 – 00:16:24.330] Solution [00:16:24.330 – 00:16:27.570] And then next pula kita nak kena ada [00:16:28.870 – 00:16:30.410] Benefits, social proof [00:16:32.490 – 00:16:34.130] Haa, sekejap eh, kenapa dia tak ni ya [00:16:36.320 – 00:16:37.600] Oh, tadi saya tengok-tengok kan [00:16:37.600 – 00:16:38.020] Okay [00:16:39.500 – 00:16:39.900] Solution [00:16:43.940 – 00:16:44.340] Benefit [00:16:46.560 – 00:16:47.360] Social proof [00:16:49.760 – 00:16:50.460] Lepas tu [00:16:50.960 – 00:16:52.400] Kita nak kena ada pula [00:16:53.580 – 00:16:54.660] Offer CTA warning [00:16:56.380 – 00:16:56.780] Offer [00:16:58.200 – 00:16:59.000] CTA warning [00:16:59.000 – 00:17:00.980] So, ada berapa kat sini? Sembilan, betul tak? [00:17:01.460 – 00:17:01.860] Sembilan [00:17:01.860 – 00:17:02.800] Haa, betul lah [00:17:04.020 – 00:17:05.200] Problem killer solution [00:17:05.200 – 00:17:06.660] Benefit social proof of state warning [00:17:06.660 – 00:17:08.700] Okay, so bila dah dapat 9 ni [00:17:08.700 – 00:17:10.980] Cuba try, kita start dengan hook dulu [00:17:11.560 – 00:17:13.140] So kat sini kita boleh [00:17:13.140 – 00:17:14.660] Buat insert [00:17:14.660 – 00:17:16.220] Kita boleh masukkan satu line [00:17:16.220 – 00:17:18.140] At least kita nak divide dia [00:17:18.960 – 00:17:20.820] So kita boleh buat copywriting ni bermula [00:17:20.820 – 00:17:22.560] Dekat sini, kita follow je [00:17:22.560 – 00:17:23.980] Hook dia, hook dia apa [00:17:23.980 – 00:17:26.160] Hook dia kita nak hook educate lah [00:17:27.960 – 00:17:28.420] Contohnya [00:17:28.420 – 00:17:30.620] Hook kita educate, so kita pun fikir [00:17:31.480 – 00:17:32.880] orang masuk dalam website [00:17:32.880 – 00:17:33.980] kita nak buat hood educate [00:17:37.100 – 00:17:40.950] kenapa ramai [00:17:40.950 – 00:17:42.430] kanak-kanak [00:17:47.060 – 00:17:51.030] terkena speech delay [00:17:53.020 – 00:17:54.100] nampak dah panjang [00:17:54.100 – 00:17:55.000] so kita pendek kan lah [00:17:56.400 – 00:17:58.950] kenapa anak [00:17:58.950 – 00:18:00.570] terkena speech delay [00:18:01.590 – 00:18:03.110] dah, lagi pendek [00:18:03.110 – 00:18:04.290] ok, itulah [00:18:04.290 – 00:18:06.010] dia punya line dia tu [00:18:06.010 – 00:18:08.190] so kita pergi pula kepada [00:18:08.950 – 00:18:10.330] katalah hood kita educate [00:18:10.330 – 00:18:12.270] ok, lepas tu kita mungkin [00:18:12.790 – 00:18:16.790] boleh di mark kat sini. Kita buat macam ni. Alamak. Haa. [00:18:16.850 – 00:18:21.070] Kita di mark macam ni. Kita buat dalam kurungan letak [00:18:22.730 – 00:18:25.610] gambar berkaitan. So kita akan letak satu gambar berkaitan. [00:18:30.510 – 00:18:34.870] Gambar related ataupun letak gambar artikel. Okey. Artikel [00:18:36.750 – 00:18:42.090] peratusan anak speech delay. Haa. Buat macam tu. So kita tahu [00:18:42.090 – 00:18:46.550] Okey. Lepas tu bila dia scroll bawah, kita akan tuliskan lah. [00:18:49.270 – 00:18:52.230] Sebab kita nak buat artikel. So, kita kena fikir dia punya [00:18:52.230 – 00:18:54.890] structure dulu. Okey. So, kita akan buat hook, educate. [00:18:55.390 – 00:18:56.910] Lepas tu kita halatkan problem terus. [00:19:03.020 – 00:19:04.640] Rupanya, kajian dah buktikan. [00:19:07.740 – 00:19:10.080] Seperti macam tu. Saya break-breakkan dia. [00:19:10.220 – 00:19:12.400] Sebab kita dah belajar tadi kan. Teknik bukit bukau. [00:19:12.500 – 00:19:14.540] Dia kena panjang pendek, panjang pendek macam tu. [00:19:15.140 – 00:19:16.580] Rupanya kajian dah buktikan. [00:19:18.820 – 00:19:20.260] Screen time [00:19:20.260 – 00:19:23.920] 2 jam [00:19:23.920 – 00:19:25.980] Sehari [00:19:25.980 – 00:19:33.190] Screen time lebih 4 jam [00:19:35.840 – 00:19:38.140] Punca utama [00:19:42.620 – 00:19:43.960] Anak [00:19:43.960 – 00:19:45.660] Terkena [00:19:45.660 – 00:19:50.390] Speech delay [00:19:50.390 – 00:19:51.990] Contohlah, kita buat [00:19:51.990 – 00:19:53.490] Anak [00:19:53.490 – 00:19:55.650] Terkena speech delay [00:19:55.650 – 00:19:58.750] So, layan je, buat je [00:19:58.750 – 00:19:59.710] Letaklah pula [00:19:59.710 – 00:20:01.590] Gambar [00:20:01.590 – 00:20:03.270] Otak [00:20:07.750 – 00:20:13.830] terkena frekuensi elektromagnetik [00:20:13.830 – 00:20:18.700] phone. Bahaya. [00:20:20.640 – 00:20:22.060] Kita buat explain. [00:20:23.940 – 00:20:31.070] Elektromagnetik phone punca anak. [00:20:32.150 – 00:20:37.450] Dia macam tu tau. So, saya nak awak buat ikut flow ni. [00:20:37.450 – 00:20:41.870] cuba-cuba try. Problem. Okey, highlightkan problem. Okey. [00:20:43.490 – 00:20:52.470] Highlightkan je lah. Tapi saya tahu ramai mak, ayah [00:20:52.470 – 00:21:06.650] yang kita buat. Satu, busy kerja, kerja tak sempat pantau, [00:21:08.850 – 00:21:13.810] hantar tariska. Kalau awak pening dengan centre, mungkin awak [00:21:13.810 – 00:21:16.230] boleh je kalau awak nak buat ke tepi. Ha ni tu pula [00:21:16.230 – 00:21:19.710] pada awak lah. Awak nak buat dia ke tepi pun boleh je. Cuma [00:21:19.710 – 00:21:22.950] kalau saya, biasanya website ni by default dia center punya [00:21:22.950 – 00:21:25.630] design lah kan. Sebab dia kita scroll ke bawah. Cuma yang [00:21:25.630 – 00:21:28.970] ni, yang ni mungkin dia tak adalah center. Okey, busy buat [00:21:28.970 – 00:21:37.400] kerja tak sempat pantau. Pas pada pengasuh, nenek jaga ke [00:21:37.400 – 00:21:41.300] apa ke. Adalah benda-benda yang kita cuba nak relate dengan [00:21:41.300 – 00:21:47.780] dia. Jadi, kita akan buat penceritaan tu ikut flow. Hook apa, problem apa, killer [00:21:47.780 – 00:21:52.720] result apa, solution apa. Memperkenalkan. Tulis je kat sini. So, problem. Lepas tu kita [00:21:52.720 – 00:22:05.420] halatkan. Tapi, Alhamdulillah, lepas amalkan, scan, scan, scan, scan. Itu adalah kita [00:22:05.420 – 00:22:13.780] punya killer result. So, masuk pada solution. Perkenalkan produk. Blah, blah, blah, blah, [00:22:13.780 – 00:22:17.540] bla bla bla bla bla bla. Ini pula solution. Lepas tu benefit. [00:22:17.740 – 00:22:21.300] Haa manfaat. Haa kelebihan jika amalkan. Masukkanlah. So di [00:22:21.300 – 00:22:24.580] pertengahan ni adalah gambar-gambar dia. Gambar bla bla bla [00:22:25.480 – 00:22:29.480] and adalah gambar bla bla bla. Masukkanlah. Point dia jangan [00:22:29.480 – 00:22:34.020] fikir nak masuk firma lagi. Buat dulu dalam words. Buat dulu [00:22:34.020 – 00:22:39.520] daripada atas sebelah bawah. Try. Hayal. Macam itulah. Layak [00:22:39.520 – 00:22:43.040] layak layak. Okey. Kelebihan. Dah masuk kelebihan. [00:22:43.780 – 00:22:46.500] Lepas tu masuk social proof pula. Apa? Testimony eh. [00:22:46.980 – 00:22:50.400] Okey. Testimony ni. Anak cikkiah. [00:22:51.040 – 00:22:52.640] Okey. Yang ni best. Aku masukkan. [00:22:52.940 – 00:22:55.200] Lepas tu aku nak masukkan. Aku nak masukkan ni. Testimony. [00:22:55.420 – 00:23:02.670] Dia maksudnya, bila awak buat dalam words ni, saya nak awak free flow. [00:23:03.130 – 00:23:06.890] Awak macam buat je. Buat je. Buat je. Layan je. [00:23:07.810 – 00:23:09.870] Layan je. Tak ada fikir. Offer. Okey. Aku nak. [00:23:10.550 – 00:23:12.990] Jom dapatkan offer. [00:23:12.990 – 00:23:15.430] sebab awak kena tahu tau, bila awak nak [00:23:15.430 – 00:23:17.610] buat kat sini nanti, awak tiba-tiba [00:23:17.610 – 00:23:19.230] automatically jadi blank, macam, alamak [00:23:19.230 – 00:23:20.770] nak tulis apa eh, sebab [00:23:20.770 – 00:23:23.610] waktu dalam website, awak dah start fikir [00:23:23.610 – 00:23:25.570] pasal design, awak dah fikir dah pasal [00:23:25.570 – 00:23:27.090] wording, pasal copywriting [00:23:27.090 – 00:23:29.930] nanti awak jadi blank nanti, so saya nak cadangkan [00:23:31.090 – 00:23:31.570] waktu [00:23:31.570 – 00:23:33.370] dekat sini, baru kita fokus pada design [00:23:34.510 – 00:23:35.470] untuk copywriting [00:23:35.470 – 00:23:37.450] wording, biarkan free flow, so kita [00:23:37.450 – 00:23:39.490] cuba baca, baca, baca [00:23:39.490 – 00:23:41.010] tulis, tulis, tulis, tulis [00:23:41.010 – 00:23:42.630] Sampai lelah sekali [00:23:43.190 – 00:23:43.930] Oh ni [00:23:45.930 – 00:23:47.490] Jangan biarkan melarat [00:23:50.370 – 00:23:51.750] Contoh macam tu [00:23:51.750 – 00:23:52.190] Tulis [00:23:52.190 – 00:23:53.290] Pemuda-pemuda [00:23:53.290 – 00:23:53.750] Okay [00:23:53.750 – 00:23:55.530] So ini adalah cara nak buat [00:23:55.530 – 00:23:56.650] Copywriting sales page [00:23:56.650 – 00:23:57.410] Memang bodoh [00:23:57.410 – 00:23:58.010] Memang simple [00:23:58.010 – 00:23:59.510] Sebab tujuan dia adalah [00:23:59.510 – 00:24:01.330] Untuk kita luahkan segala idea [00:24:01.330 – 00:24:02.930] Panjang pun tak apa guys [00:24:02.930 – 00:24:04.790] Jangan struggle nak cuba potong cepat sangat [00:24:05.370 – 00:24:07.550] Sebab kita nak kena bagi idea tu keluar [00:24:08.210 – 00:24:09.350] Once dah settle [00:24:09.350 – 00:24:10.330] Awak buat pula [00:24:10.330 – 00:24:11.030] Okay awak [00:24:11.030 – 00:24:12.090] Center bawah ni [00:24:12.090 – 00:24:13.490] Awak insert satu line lagi [00:24:13.490 – 00:24:15.610] Patawak tulis ni adalah [00:24:15.610 – 00:24:16.810] Bersih pendek [00:24:17.690 – 00:24:19.010] Patawak buat sekali lagi [00:24:19.010 – 00:24:20.450] Copy semua ni [00:24:21.590 – 00:24:23.390] Patawak copy contohnya macam ni [00:24:23.390 – 00:24:24.910] Patawak paste [00:24:25.950 – 00:24:27.250] Patawak buat potong kan [00:24:27.250 – 00:24:29.470] Potong potong potong potong potong potong [00:24:29.470 – 00:24:30.090] Potong potong potong potong [00:24:30.090 – 00:24:31.050] Potong potong potong potong [00:24:31.950 – 00:24:32.810] Potong macam tu [00:24:32.810 – 00:24:34.830] Kalau nak letak gambar dalam ni [00:24:34.830 – 00:24:36.130] Boleh je insert image [00:24:36.130 – 00:24:37.970] Insert je image upload [00:24:37.970 – 00:24:39.970] Setelah saya nak insert image [00:24:39.970 – 00:24:41.430] Untuk saya nak boleh bayangkan [00:24:42.370 – 00:24:43.670] Okey saya letak gambar [00:24:44.890 – 00:24:45.830] Pun boleh juga [00:24:45.830 – 00:24:46.890] Pecik kasih gambar tu [00:24:46.890 – 00:24:47.770] Ia tak besar sangat [00:24:47.770 – 00:24:48.630] Macam ni [00:24:48.630 – 00:24:49.510] Pun boleh nampak [00:24:49.510 – 00:24:50.650] Kadang-kadang macam website dah dia [00:24:50.650 – 00:24:51.050] Jadi ya [00:24:51.050 – 00:24:52.490] So at least kita boleh [00:24:52.490 – 00:24:53.250] Buat flow dia [00:24:53.250 – 00:24:54.290] Buat bodoh-bodoh dulu [00:24:54.290 – 00:24:54.910] Daripada atas [00:24:54.910 – 00:24:56.230] Sampailah ke bawah [00:24:56.230 – 00:24:57.730] Jadi ini teknik [00:24:57.730 – 00:24:58.610] Copywriting website [00:24:58.610 – 00:24:59.770] Dan kena ingat balik [00:24:59.770 – 00:25:01.030] Artikel yang kita dah baca tadi [00:25:01.890 – 00:25:02.410] Artikel [00:25:04.370 – 00:25:05.290] One Moose [00:25:05.290 – 00:25:05.910] Dan [00:25:06.530 – 00:25:07.590] Aduh saya bengang lah [00:25:07.590 – 00:25:08.650] Kenapa tak dapat artikel ni [00:25:08.650 – 00:25:09.810] Takpelah awak baca lah eh [00:25:09.810 – 00:25:11.350] Saya scroll beratasi bawah [00:25:11.350 – 00:25:16.590] awak. Okey. Yang ni awak boleh pause eh. Video ni untuk awak [00:25:16.590 – 00:25:30.530] baca. Yang ni. Yang ni awak boleh pause. Bagus tak awak baca [00:25:30.530 – 00:25:58.980] sebab yang ni cara penulisan artikel. Okey. Mudah-mudahan [00:25:58.980 – 00:26:03.840] awak sempat baca. Sebab awak abaikan lah. Kala-kala hitam putih [00:26:03.840 – 00:26:06.580] ni memang tak bagus sebab website saya lagi lawa. Cuma [00:26:06.580 – 00:26:09.840] website dia saya rasa dah down. Okey server tak bayar ke. [00:26:09.840 – 00:26:10.780] Macam itulah kan [00:26:10.780 – 00:26:12.420] Jadi boleh baca kat sini [00:26:13.960 – 00:26:14.580] Alright [00:26:14.580 – 00:26:15.620] So itu sahaja guys [00:26:15.620 – 00:26:16.660] Untuk video kali ni [00:26:16.660 – 00:26:18.320] Kita jumpa dalam tempat selanjutnya [00:26:18.320 – 00:26:20.120] Yang mana kita akan [00:26:20.120 – 00:26:21.660] Gunakan teknik copywriting [00:26:21.660 – 00:26:22.580] Yang kita dah belajar ni [00:26:22.580 – 00:26:23.860] Kita akan buat pula [00:26:23.860 – 00:26:24.860] Design dalam fitmark [00:26:24.860 – 00:26:25.820] So jumpa [00:26:25.820 – 00:26:27.280] Dalam video yang selanjutnya [00:26:27.280 – 00:26:27.800] Zaz